Very, very good guys - congratulations on the production of a very successful piece - some great MoAs, you observe the 180 degree rule and the SRS is effective. In addition, you have gone beyond expectations and used transitions (fades) and filters (CCTV effect) to dreat effect. Great shot variety throughout - you create the feeling that the whole thing is being watched without their knowing really well. Nice to see some representation of females that challenges stereotypes. Excellent that you join wo unrelated spaces seemlessly.
For the future The lighting in the room - if you could have gotten the bulb to work, it would have been great. If you ever get technical problems, don't be reluctant to ask the technicians. they are there to help you. In the S /RS sequence, you might have played with the angles more to show the female power, so shot the last part from a low angle?
On your blog - you get the prize for best blog i have seen to date. There is a lot of things here that make it level 4. You use illustrations well and also text to explain, some of the video (such as of Issac are great), you embed video to illustrate points as well. My only criticism is that there a few gaps - Storyboard? health and safety? You need to have a discussion of editing techniques used and any discussions about how the final edited piece should look, well done.
Very, very good guys - congratulations on the production of a very successful piece - some great MoAs, you observe the 180 degree rule and the SRS is effective. In addition, you have gone beyond expectations and used transitions (fades) and filters (CCTV effect) to dreat effect. Great shot variety throughout - you create the feeling that the whole thing is being watched without their knowing really well. Nice to see some representation of females that challenges stereotypes. Excellent that you join wo unrelated spaces seemlessly.
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The lighting in the room - if you could have gotten the bulb to work, it would have been great. If you ever get technical problems, don't be reluctant to ask the technicians. they are there to help you.
In the S /RS sequence, you might have played with the angles more to show the female power, so shot the last part from a low angle?
Well done.
On your blog - you get the prize for best blog i have seen to date. There is a lot of things here that make it level 4. You use illustrations well and also text to explain, some of the video (such as of Issac are great), you embed video to illustrate points as well. My only criticism is that there a few gaps - Storyboard? health and safety? You need to have a discussion of editing techniques used and any discussions about how the final edited piece should look, well done.
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